高三英语作文:某周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见
假定你是李华,你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信,内容主要包括:
1. 说明你是该报的忠实读者
2. 赞赏该报优点:
1) 兼顾国内外新闻
2) 介绍名人成功故事
3. 提出建议:刊登指导英语学习的文章
注意:
1. 词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;
2. 能够适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!
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Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
范文【解析】
editorinchief是什么意思
本文为书信形式的应用文写作。信的开头和结尾都已经给出。题目中对文章结构和部分内容做出了提示,降低了写作难度,考生可在此基础上适当添加细节。根据题目,文章的内容分为3部分,一是“介绍自己为该报的忠实读者”,二是该报的优点,三是给报刊提出建议。其中第二、三点为重点。考生添加的报刊优点和建议理应合情合理,同时原因、建议不只一个,所以一定要注意写作的逻辑性,适当使用过
渡性词语,如besides,what’s more, finally等。为了提升文章的表达档次,能够注意使用较复杂的句式(如定语从句、原因状语从句、目的状语从句)。
【范文1】Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!
I’m a regular reader of your Weekly and it is due to its two advantages that I show strong love for the newspaper.
②On one hand, it is a newspaper where readers can get the latest civil and foreign news in time. ③On the other hand②, there are many stories about how famous people succeeded, from which we can benefit a lot.④
However, I still have a suggestion to make. If only the Weekly contained some articles guiding us through learning English⑤, it will be more than a newspaper for a middle school student. ⑥
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【范文评析】
本篇习作语言地道,覆盖了所有要点,虽只有94个词,但在此中,众多的高级句式结构却被作者使用得恰到好处,如定语从句、强调结