阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使其构成一篇完整的短文。
【注意】
reaction to a book or an article1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
was standing in the checkout line behind a woman who looked to be in her 60s. When it was her turn to pay, the cashier greeted her by name and asked her how she was doing.
The woman looked down, shook her head and said, “Not so goodMy husband just lost his job and my son is up to his old tricks again. The truth is, I don’t know how I’m going to get through the holidays.” Then she gave the cashier food stamps (食品券).
Neither did I know how I could get through the days a year ago during my fresh year in the company. I didn’t know the rules, I was not familiar with the work, and I couldn’t feel the value of myself. I was even wondering whether I could get along, as my father was gone, my moth
er had no work and my brother was only 7. That feeling was exactly what the woman had said. Fortunately, things had changed since I received my colleague’s card, from which I felt the encouragement, and sensed happiness falling upon me again.
So I really wanted to help but didn’t know how. Should I offer to pay for her groceries, or ask for her husband’s resume (简历)? As I walked into the parking lot, I spotted the woman returning her shopping cart. Suddenly I remembered something in my purse that I thought could help her. It wasn’t a handful of cash or an offer of a job for her husband, but maybe it would make her life better.
Then I approached the woman. My heart pounded as this was the first time that I had come with the idea to help a stranger.
“Excuse me,” I said, my voice trembling a bit, “I couldn’t help accidentally hearing what you said to the cashier. It sounds like you’re going through a really hard time right now. I’m so sorry. I’d like to give you something.”
I handed her the small card from my purse.
Paragraph 1:
When the woman read the card, she began to cry                                                                                                                                                                                 
Paragraph 2:
After we embraced, I walked back to my car and the words on the card crowded into my mind again.                                                                                      
续写需注意
一、情节!情节!情节!(紧扣key words和人物性格,段首段尾自然衔接,恰当凸显主题)
Read for the characters (尤其是主要人物)
Read for plot and emotions
Predict the ending
List the outline
第一段情节构建1.要与原文情节衔接;2.要与第一段的关键词衔接;3.要与第二段首句衔接。
第二段情节构建1.要与第二段的关键词衔接;2.要与原文遥相呼应;3.要“意料之外,情理之中”;4.要根据具体语境弘扬真善美,凸显主题,升华精神。
二、心动外语神描写+环境烘托
三、非谓语;主从复合句;强调;倒装;虚拟;评价性副词;词汇、句式多样
四、书写!书写!书写!
   时态:the simple past tense
   人称:the first/third person
   文体:narration
   内容要点:
主旨会分析
主旨词:
kindness, warmth, encouragement and strength, hope, happiness 
Pass on happiness and warmth to others/help people in need and in despair/transimission of love and warmth/ pass through the low ebb
结尾句/主旨句:
1.俗语表达法:赠人玫瑰,手有余香. The roses in her hand, the flavor in mine.
2.主题词法/前后对比法:Even if a goodwill is small, a trickle can converge into a vest ocean.
3.线索词法:Love and hope are constantly tramsmitted through a simple card.
4.环境衬托法: A ray of sunlight shined through the car window, warming up the heart of both me and people who were in despair.
A shaft of golden sunlight, sliding into/filtering in through the car window, lighted/lit my heart as well as the future path to a better life.
5.人生感悟法:I am fully convinced now that warmth and kindness never vanish/will accompany me permanently, leading me to spread love to those in need.
范文要赏析
VERSION 1
When the woman read the card’s only two words, she began to cryAnd wiping her tears, she whimpered 抽噎着说, “You have no idea how much this means to me.” She dumped all those difficulties and troubles on me ...倾诉烦恼, sobbing啜泣 about the husband who was out of job and the son who was unreliable. She could hardly contain/hold back herself抑制不住自己. I was a little startled by有点点吃惊的h
er reply. Having never done anything like this before, I didn’t know what kind of reaction I might receive. All I could think to say was, “Oh my. Would it be OK to give you a hug?” 
After we embraced, I walked to my car and words on the card crowded into my mind again. “You matter.” Saying it to myself, I felt a warm glow spreading inside me. It reminded me of my colleague’s encouragement and told me I was not alone. That happened again to the stranger woman going through the experience. Only a simple card gave me far more happiness and fulfillment. Deeply touched, I came home and ordered 整理my own box of You Matter cards and started sharing them. Happiness deserves to be passed on from one to another.
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A possible version
Para 1 When the woman read the card’s only two words, she began to cry. And through her tears, she said, “You have no idea how much this means to me.” She dumped out all those
difficulties, sobbing about the husband who was out of job and the son who was unreliable. She could hardly contain herself. I was a little startled by her reply. Having never done anything like this before, I didn’t know what kind of reaction I might receive. All I could think to say was, “Oh my. Would it be OK to give you a hug?” 91W