专题21 书面表达
考点3 咨询建议类
（一）
（2022·浙江金华·中考真题）
1. 假如你是Li Hua，你的外国好友Frank来信告知他将成为你校七年级新生。请根据下列表格中的内容，结合自己初中阶段学习、生活等方面的经历，回一封邮件，供他参考。
注意：1. 文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；参考词汇供选择使用；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数：80~100；
4. 邮件的格式及正文首句已给出，不计入总词数；正文首句仅供选择使用。
正文首句： I’m glad to know you’re coming to study in our school.
内容要点
参考词汇
Things needed
notebook, dictionary,…
Attitude（态度）to take
hard-working, active, happy,…
Relationship to develop
respect, get along with,…
Others
…
Dear Frank,
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Frank,
I’m glad to know you’re coming to study in our school. Here is something I’d like to share.
To begin with, you need to prepare some notebooks and dictionaries, especially a Chinese one, because you will often need them in your study. As a student, you have to work hard. But whatever happens, stay active, even when you fail.
And respect the teachers as it’s a Chinese tradition. Besides, you will be happier if you get on well with your classmates. Lastly, it is a good idea to develop some hobbies to make your life better and more colourful.
I hope my advice will work. Looking forward to seeing you!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求根据题干表格中的内容给Frank写封邮件，告知他在中国学习的一些注意事项，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段和第三段根据表格中的提示详细告知他在中国学习时需要注意的事项；第四段表达自己的希望。
写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
（二）
（2022·四川南充·中考真题）
2. 假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Tracy的学校即将开设特选修课程，她正在考虑是否选修汉语，来信询问你的建议。请你根据所给提示给她写封回信。
要点：
（1）给出你的建议；
（2）谈谈学习汉语的重要性；
（3）结合自身经历，介绍至少2种学习汉语的方法。
要求：
1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4.词数100左右(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Tracy,
I’m so glad to hear from you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tracy,
I’m so glad to hear from you. Knowing you have an interest in Chinese, I suggest you choose the Chinese course. With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate, but also a chance to admire Chinese culture.
As a Chinese, I have been learning Chinese for many years. I have much experience to share with you. In my opinion, there are many ways to learn Chinese. It’s useful to read Chinese books and listen to Chinese songs. What’s more, you are supposed to join a Chinese club to practice your spoken Chinese. Learning is a lifelong journey. Keep practicing every day, then it will bring something new.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。针对Tracy是否选修汉语给出建议，谈谈学习汉语的重要性并给出学习汉语的方法。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第二人称来行文，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段给出建议，是否应该选修汉语以及学习汉语的重要性；第二段结合自身经历，介绍学习汉语的方法；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
（三）
（2022·浙江绍兴·中考真题）
3. 假设你是刘军，在上周末的乡村旅游中，你发现了一些游客的不文明行为。请根据下表信息给某英文报VOICE栏目的编辑写一封邮件，反映这些问题并提出建议。
Uncivilized behaviors
Suggestions
● threw rubbish everywhere
● picked flowers
● climbed trees
● put rubbish into bins
● …
注意：
（1）邮件内容必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节；
editor的汉语
（2）你的建议至少两条；
（3）词数：80—100；
（4）邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：不文明行为uncivilized behavior；编辑editor
Dear editor,
I was shocked to see some uncivilized behaviors when I took a trip to a village last weekend. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________