Shopping in stores vs. shopping online
Nowadays, with the high development of the Internet, shopping online is becoming more and more popular, especially among young people.
As far as I can see, there are some advantages and disadvantages of online shopping. On the one hand, it has some great advantages. Firstly, it is more convenient for the reason that you can buy anything you want within some clicks instead of stepping into stores, and it really saves too much time. Secondly, online shopping is only determined by your mood, there is no need to think about the weather, opening and closing time or even places. Thirdly, sometimes online shopping is really cheap and saves money. On the other hand, online shopping has some disadvantages. First of all, you can't touch the thing so you don't know how it feels, which can be avoided in stores. Then, you can't try it on if you shop online, but you can see the effect of clothing worn on your body in stores.
Above all, either shopping in stores or shopping online has advantages and disadvantages, so you can choose a way according to different needs. However, in my opinion, online shoppi
ng will become a trend in the near future.
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among: 指三者或三者以上的同类事物之间。
between: 多指两者之间，但现代英语中也可指三者或三者以上，表示彼此间清楚的独立的个体关系。
amid: 正式用词，侧重指在某个地方的中间或被某个东西包围着或在非同类人中间。
amongst: 与among同义，是among的变体。一般说来among总能替代amongst,而amongst则不然。
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As far as I can see, there are some advantages and disadvantages of online shopping.
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∙[学习提示] 易混词汇: advantage, benefit, interest, favour, profit, gain 均有“利益，好处”之意。
advantage: 指因某方面占优势或利用某机会以及对方弱点而获得利益与好处。
benefit: 普通用词，指通过正当手段从物质或精神方面得到的任何好处或利益。
interest: 作“利益”解时，多用复数形式，既可指集团、体的利益，又可指个人的利益。
favour: 指在竞争中获得的advantage,也可指在狭隘的个人利益。
profit: 着重收益，尤指从物质、钱财等方面获得的利益。
gain: 指获得的物质利益，也暗示不损坏他人利益而得的无形好处。
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On the one hand, it has some great advantages.
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∙[学习提示] 易混词汇: big, large, great, grand 均含“大的”之意。
big: 常用词，使用广泛，较口语化。多指体积、重量或容量等方面的“大”，有时也用于描写抽象之物。
large: 普通用词，含义广，指体积、面积、容量、数量以及程度等方面的大，具体或抽象意
义均可用。
great: 普通用词，可指具体东西的“大”，但更常指事物的重要，人的行为、品格的伟大等，带一定的感情彩。
grand: 侧重指盛大、绝大，有气派。
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Firstly, it is more convenient for the reason that you can buy anything you want within some clicks instead of stepping into stores, and it really saves too much time.
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∙[学习提示] 易混词汇: buy, purchase 均含“购买”之意。
buy: 普通日常用词，既可指日常随意购物也可指大的购买。
purchase: 正式用词，指大宗购货或购买重要东西。无感情彩，强调物品的购得。
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∙[推荐词汇] too much在写作中使用的太多，在某些语境下可考虑换为excessive。
Excessive drinking induces alcoholism.
饮酒过度会引起酒精中毒。
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Secondly, online shopping is only determined by your mood, there is no need to think about the weather, opening and closing time or even places.
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∙[学习提示] 易混词汇: decide, determine, resolve, settle 都含“决定”之意。
decide: 侧重指经过思考、比较、讨论或询问之后做出的决定。
determine: 指经过深思熟虑，决心去做某事并坚持施行。
resolve: 语气较强，强调以坚定不移的信念去做或不做某事，暗含有远大抱负和坚强决心。
settle: 指排除犹豫、怀疑和争论之后作出明确的最终结论。
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Thirdly, sometimes online shopping is really cheap and saves money.
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∙[学习提示] 易混词汇: inexpensive, cheap 均含“便宜的，价廉的”之意。
inexpensive: 指商品价格公道，数量和价格相当。
cheap: 普通用词，既可指物美价廉，又可指价格低但质量却不怎么样。
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On the other hand, online shopping has some disadvantages.
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First of all, you can't touch the thing so you don't know how it feels, which can be avoided in stores.
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∙[学习提示] 易混词汇: escape, avoid 都有“躲避危险”之意。
escape: 多指避开实际的威胁，暗示威胁或危险正在迫近。
avoid: 侧重有意识地躲避开要冒险或有危险的事物或情况。
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∙[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow
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Then, you can't try it on if you shop online, but you can see the effect of clothing worn on your body in stores.
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