全国卷2英语满分作文范文2015
    :2010-2015全国二卷英语作文+范文
    假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter层表示希望来中国教书。你校现在需招聘外教,请给他写封信,告知招聘信息。内容主要包括:
    1.教授课程:英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英语等 2.授课对象:高中生(至少三年英语基础)
    3.工作量:—每周12学时,任选三门课 —担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问(advisor) 注意:
    1.字数100左右;
    2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
    3.开头语已为你写好,请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。
    Best, Li Hua
    2010 范文 Dear Peter.
    I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students. If you e, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing, Britain Today and America Today, and teach 12 hours a week. The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experiences. Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor to our students' English club or our school's English newspaper.
    Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions. I'd be more than happy to help. Best wishes, Li Hua
    假定你是李华,你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信,内容主要包括:
    1. 说明你是该报的忠实读者 2. 赞赏该报优点: 1) 兼顾国内外新闻 2) 介绍名人成功故事
    3. 提出建议:刊登指导英语学习的文章 注意:
    1. 词数100左右,开头语已为你写好; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Editor-in-Chief,
    Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!
    Sincerely yours,
    Li Hua
    2011 范文
    本文为书信形式的应用文写作。信的开头和结尾都已经给出。题目中对文章结构和部分内容做出了提示,降低了写作难度,考生可在此基础上适当添加细节。根据题目,文章的内容分为3部分,一是“介绍自己为该报的忠实读者”,二是该报的优点,三是给报刊提出建议。其中第二、三点为重点。考生添加的报刊优点和建议应当合情合理,同时原因、建议不只一个,因此一定要注意写作的逻辑性,适当运用过渡性词语,如besides,what’s more, finall
y等。为了提高文章的表达档次,可以注意使用较复杂的句式(如定语从句、原因状语从句、目的状语从句)。
    【范文1】
    Dear Editor-in-Chief,
    Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!
    As a student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will e even more popular.
    Sincerely yours,
    Li Hua
    【范文2】
    Dear Editor-in-Chief,
    Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!
    I’m a regular reader of your Weekly and it is due to its two advantages that I show strong love for the newspaper. ②On one hand, it is a newspaper where readers can get the latest civil and foreign news in time. ③On the other hand②, there are many stories about how famous people succeeded, from which we can benefit a lot.④
editor suggestion
    However, I still have a suggestion to make. If only the Weekly contained some articles guiding us through learning English⑤, it will be more than a newspaper for a middle school student. ⑥
    Sincerely yours,
    Li Hua
    【范文评析】
    本篇习作语言地道,覆盖了所有要点,虽只有94个词,但在此中,众多的高级句式结构却
被作者运用得恰到好处,如定语从句、强调结构、宾语从句、虚拟语气等。难能可贵的是,作者对写作要点拿捏得很准,最后在提建议时,适当发挥,使得建议的意义更大。 【词句积累】
    ①使用强调结构,使得句型富有变化。
    ②用on one hand,on the other hand来代替庸俗的first(ly),second(ly),非常好!另外,还能增加字数。
    ③在该句中使用where定语从句,显示该考生的语法很强。
    ④介词后的宾语从句,非限制性定语从句的应用,令阅卷老师折服了。作者的巨型布局艺术,其语法的娴熟,并能得心应手地收发自如,让阅卷老师赞赏。
    ⑤此处使用if only,谓语要用虚拟语气,妙!妙!另外,guide sb. through doing sth. 体现该考生较强的词汇运用能力。
    ⑥more than是一个亮点表达。该句使短文的意义得到升华。
    【范文3】
    Dear Editor-in-Chief,
    Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror! I have been a faithful reader since Global Mirror started. ①
    It is the unique advantages of the newspaper that always attract my affection. ②For one thing③, the newspaper covers news both at home and abroad, which opens a window for us to learn what is happening in the world. ④For another③, stories about some famous people are introduced to readers, which tell of how they succeeded in what they did.